As a child I often accompanied my father to his small coin shop and spent hours watching him work. When I was older， I sometimes set up displays， waited on customers， and even balanced the books. This experience instilled in me the desire to own and manage my own business someday， yet I understand that the business world today is more complex. This complexity requires more education， and with that in mind， I am applying to the Master’s of Business Administration program at Indiana University Bloomington (IUB).
通過一個故事開頭，講述自己爲何對business感興趣。
In addition to my helping out in my father’s business， I have had numerous other work experiences that further enhance my qualifications for this program. My resume enumerates the various positions I have held at Kerasotes Theaters， Chili’s restaurants， and Indiana University’s new Student Recreational Sports Center (SRSC)， and what all of these positions have in common is an emphasis on serving the public fectively. Further， as an assistant manager at the Showplace 11 and a staff coordinator at the SRSC， I have gained valuable expertise in managing employees and creating work schedules. Both of these positions have allowed me to develop my sales and people skills， which are extremely important in an increasingly service-driven marketplace.
講述自己的相關經歷。但是感覺在談及經歷時候不夠具體，應該說明具體做了什麼事情，從中得到什麼經驗或者教訓。
Not all of my work experience has been as a paid employee. Part of my volunteering experience at Middleway House， the local battered women’s shelter， involved extensive work on computers， including word processing， organizing databases and creating spreadsheets. Also， I recently participated in an internship program for academic credit with the Eli Lilly corporation in the personnel division. As a management intern， I was able to watch the workings of a major corporation up close and would like the opportunity to combine my experiences with the theoretical background available in the MBA program at IUB， with its emphasis on computers， marketing and human resources.
志願者活動同樣值得在ps中講述。
My successful internship is one element of my overall academic success as an undergraduate here at IUB， yet I have also made time for a variety of extracurricular activities， including working for my sorority and competing in intramural basketball. My positive experiences here have resulted in my desire to stay in Bloomington to continue my academic endeavors; furthermore， continuing my education here would allow me to make important business contacts， with the career goal of opening my own computer consulting firm in the Midwest. 論文微信號：dissertation-essay
個人數據：
申請人姓名：拼寫方式和書寫形式應始終保持一致、相同;標明姓氏;與護照、戶口簿上的姓名相同一致。
出生日期：按擬去國的歷法習慣順序排列。如：MM/DD/YY OR DD/MM/YY
通訊地址：能保證你能及時收到來信的準確地址。能將自己通訊地址的中文標籤寄給對方使用爲最好。
公民身份和簽發護照的國家：CHINESE、P. R. CHINA
受教育近況：
1)所學專業及學歷
2)畢業院系
3)院校所在地
工作情況：目前工作單位及所從事的專業工作。
留學計劃：儘可能簡單扼要地說明你想學習的課程及打算開始學習的日期.如擬攻讀研究生課程的應該簡單扼要地說明自己感興趣的研究領域或第二志願研究領域。
經費來源：說明自己的留學資金來源或數額。如擬向對方學校提出獎學金申請，應明確表明並索取有關獎學金資料和申請表格。
外語水平：告之對方你的外語水平情況，如IELTS、TOEFL、GRE、GMAT等成績包括考試日期、考號等。
與國外學校通信時應注意的其它事項：
*拼寫準確、語法正確、格式規範、卷面整潔。
*語體得當、內容詳實、言簡意賅、不失自尊。
*最好一律用計算機書寫打印。
*對方的通信地址中務必寫上具體的系或辦公室的名稱，能有具體聯繫人的姓名及頭銜可加快通信過程。
*查清申請截止日期，申請得越早越好。
