秋天是美好的，秋天是收穫的季節，天平山的桔子，露出燦爛的笑臉，正期盼着我們的到來……
20XX年11月12日，我們來到桔園，看到桔樹上掛滿了果實，黃澄澄的，十分惹人喜愛；有一些還沒有完全成熟，果皮是綠色的。遠遠望去，掛在樹枝上的桔子有的高，有的低，像一個個小鈴鐺；又像一個個小燈籠，漂亮極了。當我採桔子的時候，小桔子似乎不願忘記大樹媽媽的養育之恩，牢牢地掛在樹枝上，我必須用力才能把它們摘下來。桔子又大又圓，皮非常薄，把一瓣桔子送入口中，像蜜一樣甜，微微的帶有一點兒酸味。我由衷（zhōng）地感到蘇州真是好山、好水、好風光！
通過這次秋遊，讓我體驗到了豐收的喜悅和勞動的艱辛。
Autumn is lovely. It is the season of harvest. There are many oranges on the trees on Tianping Mountain. They were smiling at our arrival.
On the 12th November, 20XX, we came to the orange garden and saw many lovely oranges. Some of them were not fully ripe, so their peels were green like small bells or lanterns. How beautiful! When I picked oranges, I needed to use force to pull them down. They seemed as if they were not willing to leave their mums—the orange trees. The oranges were big and round. Their peels were very thin. We tasted a section of the orange. It was sweet and a slightly sour. I feel that Suzhou has really good mountains, good water and good scenery!
Through this autumn outing, I experienced the happiness of harvest and the hardness of labor.
